Monday, November 23, 2015

9. begging scene of narrative

Don't have a really good title yet
            We stealthily climbed the recently vacuumed carpeted stairs and entered the gleaming kitchen. Not a speck of dust to be found nor a crumb to be nibbled on in the entire kitchen. Every appliance was sparkling in that special way that only recently cleaned things do.
“I don’t know about this, man” I murmured. Dane whispered back in a nonchalant manner,
 “Bro, I’m your best friend. Plus this isn’t a big deal at all.” As my bare feet started to pad across the cold, hard wooden floor of the kitchen I replied,
“Nothing is a big deal for you! You are a rule-breaker at heart.” Failing to address the real problem as he always did Dane quickly replied as though he had expected me to make that accusation and he had already thought of his counter-argument.
“You know I wouldn’t make you do anything that wasn’t one hundred percent worth it. . .  I’m telling you, hot chocolate is a million times better after midnight. You wouldn’t know, your mom is too strict on the rules for you to have ever experienced this” He said so with that huge mischievous smile that he always wore when he was convincing me to do something that I knew that I shouldn’t do.
“Fine.” I said under my breath “Just try not to make any noise, Mom is sleeping just on the other side of that wall” I pointed to the large wall that was across the living room and had a very large painting of Jesus Christ on it.
“yeah, yeah. Just think about it though, who knows if we are going to be able to talk our parents into letting us have a sleep-over ever again? We have to make the most of the night while we still have it” classic. I’m over hear thinking that if we behave well, and nothing goes wrong then maybe we’ll be able to have more sleep-over later on, and he is just thinking about the now.  acting as if the world was going to end tomorrow and no consequence would ever really reach him. Aloud I simply said, “your right, let’s do this” just telling him what he wanted to hear. This was boring, and his was fun. He just poked and prodded enough until I succumbed to the part of myself that actually wanted to do the ridiculous thing that he was suggesting.
I began getting the necessary materials ready for the perfect cup of hot-chocolate and soon enough the hot chocolate machine was giving off a low rumbling as it stirred and heated the hot-chocolate. I settled into the stool and eased into a more comfortable state of mind, thinking well if we were going to get caught it would’ve happened already.
That’s when we heard the loud clearing of someone’s throat. It was more of an announcing of one’s presence than an actual clearing of the throat. Like a lioness finding her prey trapped, knowing that escape was impossible, and making noise just to scare them before she had her fun. We slowly turned around and Dane made a small, involuntary squeak as my mom, with her hands on her hips and a how-are-you-going-to-explain-this!? expression on her face, came into view.
“Boys, why am I disappointed right now?” my mom almost spitted out. I quickly respond before Dane can say something that will really get my mom going.
“Because this isn’t the first time that you’ve told us to get to bed, and the fact that we are up here right now, looks like a direct disobedience.”
“looks like!?” my mom throws back at me, daring me to hold to that statement. uh oh! I look over at Dane in hopes for an escape. On second thought, maybe he shouldn’t say anything. Ya he knows just how to get on my mom’s nerves. Definitely better that he doesn’t say anything. . . But I’m already looking at him. It was too late, I could almost feel Dane getting ready to say whatever it is that he always says to get out of the infinite number of tight situations that he has escaped in the past.
“Traci, I know that you don’t know this, but in my house, I cannot go to sleep unless I have a warm cup of milk.” Dane begins, but I know that it’ll never work. And it doesn’t. Mom simply tells us,
“Boys, you knew a very long time ago that you needed to go to bed at 10:30 so that you could wake up and be ready to make your first day of education week a good one. If you needed anything you should’ve been preparing for that before. This wasn’t a surprise.” We both decided that it was damage control time. In his humblest voice, Dane decided that apology was the best course of action,

“You are right Traci, I should’ve planned better. We’ll head to bead right now” We headed to bed only thinking about one thing,

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